Sofia

In my opinion I believe the Dakota Access Pipe Line should not be built. The first reason I feel the DAPL shouldn’t be built is because it will destroy many homes. For example, if the pipe is built tribes are going to be forced or kicked out of their homes. Another reason I believe the DAPL shouldn’t be built is there only water source will be ruined. For example their water source will be ruined for their water that they drink and their fish.   Another reason I believe that the DAPL shouldn’t be built is that it might cause wild fires. For example, it will pollute the earth and it will cause global warming. This is why I believe the DAPL should not be built.  #NODAPL!!!! 

 

Dear Sofia

I think you should re read some of your examples because for one of your examples you put “their only water source will be riuned for their water that they drink and their fish” By SIMONE.

Dear Sofia,

I think your writing is good but you have a sentence that says “their only water source will be riuned for their water that they drink and their fish” Diego.M